Today's Quick Write We Were Doing Show Don't Tell. This Was Only five Minutes Of Writing. The Sentence that was He Was happy we tried to elaborate on and tried to make it show dont tell.
NO - HE WAS HAPPY
Yes - The smile on his face was light enough to light up the night sky. His Smile filled everyone around him with Joy. He lit everyone like a fire but the flames were joy. He always makes everyone happy.
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