Monday, June 15, 2020

Haunted House...

For our multi modal reading last week we wrote about a house that is very old fashioned and ratty. This was a very fun task.

Old house, Cross Creek, Lake Wairarapa, Wellington, New Zealand ...

There once was a scary old man who lived in a scary old house. He used to yell and scream at kids for walking past House until one day he just disappeared…


It was April 13th 1987 we walked over to the mailbox and Mr Kipper yelled at me from across the road! We ran away in terror and fright; we never walked to  the mailbox again. Dad always took us to the mailbox in the car. We lived in fright living next to that horrific man until one day we went out and he was gone... He never yelled at us; he never came outside so we called the police to come and see if he was ok because we didn't sign our death wish if he was alive and we walked in no one knew what would happen to us. They came out of the house with a body bag but it was unusual it had something sticking up. Sargent Chris came over and told my parents that he was brutally murdered with at least seven stab marks. My parents asked if they knew when it happened or who did it but that mystery was never solved. 

It is now October 23rd and we decided to torch his house as no one had come to claim it so we spread gasoline over it and then threw many light matches on it watching the house burn was a big relief there was no evil man living next to me making me have to be scared of walking to the mailbox. I am so happy that i don't have to worry about that dreaded man

3 comments:

  1. Hi Eden, Tara here. I really hope you keep creating more stories because although kinda creepy they are very interesting. I can't think of anything to change. Keep up the good work. :)

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  2. Hey Eden

    OMG that story was amazing and I really think you should make a part two. I think it was a mystery sort of thing. Suggestion is that you should have made it were they found the person but i think you should add that in a part two if you make one. :)

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  3. i really liked reading this it is very descriptive and puts a really good picture in my head and i like the title

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