This Is a quick Write i only had five minutes to write a narrative. We wrote it about a good time you had with a cousin or friend we could make it fictional this is what i wrote.
Once apon a time there was a girl called Tui and her cousin called Sophie. Sophie and Tui enjoyed exploring the jungle for fun and interesting things to do. They went out to the forest in search of a cave or a swimming hole or just something they could do. The girls stumbled across a pond but what lay beneath the surface of the water was going to change that.
when the girls jumped into the deep crystal blue water they say a shadow of something i the water Sophie Screamed so loud and got out of the water asap but Tui stayed in and said "Really Sophie its just a dark patch your fine" Sophie still not convinced jumped into the water. The shadow lurking bellow them was a Crocodile. It wasn't interested in the girls so he swam off.
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