Quick Write - Show Don't Tell

Today's Quick Write We Were Doing Show Don't Tell. This Was Only five Minutes Of Writing. The Sentence that was He Was happy we tried to elaborate on and tried to make it show dont tell. 

NO - HE WAS HAPPY 

Yes - The smile on his face was light enough to light up the night sky. His Smile filled everyone around him with Joy. He lit everyone like a fire but the flames were joy. He always makes everyone happy. 

Quick Write - Use A Sentence Starter

Today's quick write we had a sentence starter that was "The cats out of the bag now!" Whispered Sven. we also had to incorporate a invention. This Was Five minutes of work.


"The Cats out of the bag now!" Whispered Sven. "what do you mean?" whispered Billy. "Well I made this invention that is like the best thing ever and I am totally going to smash all the other contestants in the convention." Sven said with a smirk on his face.

Quick Write - Make The Reader Want To Read More

This Was Only Five Minutes Of Writing. Today we used a sentence starter.  We had to try to use Adjectives and Adverbs.

"Leave me alone, i'm about to watch the lights in the sky." Pauline Bellowed. "What Lights Their Are None."  Yelled Bob as he ran quickly down the stairs to find Pauline. He ran outside just to find Pauline siting under the night stars. "Is this what you meant by the lights in the sky?" " Get inside I have these glaces on for a reason." Pauline hurried to her feet get her brother inside. But when she looked back to see the show she had missed, the eclipse was not going to happen again for many years! She stormed inside to get revenge on her brother.

Quick Write - Planning A Setting

Today For Quick Write We Are Writing About A Setting Of Our Choose With As Much Detail As We Could. This Was Only 5 Minutes Of Work.

The sun was behind me the only thing lighting up my path was the twinkling stars and the bright beautiful moon.The Little village was all behind me, I am leaving this place will I return I am not sure. the forest that i was going to was trees and plants and birds all together the forest was the only thing that I cared about the freedom that i can have. the forest beamed with light from the stars. The Winter night sent chills down my spine it was cold and dark.  The only thing that i see in my future was this forest. 

Quick Write - Paperback Writer

For Today quick write we had five minutes to write about a character who wanted to be a paperback Writer.

My Charter has luscious black hair, and ocean blue eyes that twinkle in the moonlight. Her hair falls perfectly on her shoulders. She wears comfy clothes and only dresses up when going out. The girl always dreamed of being a Paperback Writer. She Always wrote story's from fictional to nonfictional. Her name was Lucy. She nearly always had her hair in a pony tail or bun. 

Quick Write - Write a Story On A Paper Back Writer

Today for quick write we wrote a short story about a paperback writer. This was five minutes of work.

Cathy Was her name well Cathy Cassidy, she was a beloved girl by all. The girl wanted to be a writer all she dreamed about writing sitting alone by the river and writing story about anything. The story that Cathy had dreamed about were all about family and never giving in. Everyone that meet her was amazed by what she had dreamed. She dreamed and dreamed until her parents got all her story published and the audience loved them.

Quick Write - Conflic

Today quick write was about writing a 5 minute story that had conflict in it this is my one.

One day a girl was walking with her friend bob when a massive dog started chasing them down the street at top speed the people ran threw a dark forest track just off the road. They made it about halfway and they could hear the dog whimpering they felt bad and followed the trail only to realise the dog was fine.It was the great chase now they were going to climb a tree then realised that it was all a day dream. Bob thought it was weird to have a day dream this detailed and this dramatic.

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