Overall I really enjoyed Creating my pick a path and am really proud. Some tricky parts were changing the past to present tense Next time I do a pick a path I will probably choose a different story line maybe a little less dark and scary. I hope you enjoy reading my Pick a Path!
Your pick a path was awesome because there was a lot of descriptive language. Maybe next time you could make more tan one ending because I wondered what else could happen in a dark forest. I like how you've used three paths on one page rather than everyone else has used two. Great job
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